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From: Gary Kleppe <KLEPPE@execpc.com>
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
Subject: [FFML] [C&C] Operation: Nabiki
Date: Sunday, August 03, 1997 4:58 AM
On Tue, 22 Jul 1997 21:12:38 -0400, Christopher Angel
<cja124@mail.usask.ca> wrote:
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What I didn't like about this, though, was that it was too short. Things
worked out too quickly and easily. Nabsy ain't *that* good, especially
in Nerima where Murphy's Law reigns supreme.
Hmmm, I don't know about you but it sure seems Nabiki is exempt for
Murphy's law.
Nabiki has *always* profited from *everything*
If you are interested in working more on this, I think it has great
potential for expansion into a longer story: Things get more and more
complicated, the other fiancees start counter-plots, and everything
starts to backfire on Ranma, with Soun and Genma having to shell out
more and more money to the Nabster to try to fix everything.
Money is an interesting concept in the Tendo Household... It seems that
Nabiki always gets alot of it and Soun always has enough to fix up the dojo
after it gets destroyed by Ranma and Company or a Dojo destroyer or a
<insert a Anything Goes Martial here> student ^_^.
Just a thought ^_-
Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
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