 This was the oddest thing I think I have ever been involved in in terms
 of fanfic writting...usually, more than two characters DIE by the end of it
 (sometimes...I'm getting better).  Personally, the author comentary throughout
 the fic added a little personality here and there.  The Mokona thing was
 HIGHLY overused...geeze! (TRAVIS AND SCOT:BU BUU BU BUUU!!! or fu fuu fu fuuu!!-this doesn't  translate nicely.)(Will you two get out!! Did I jump in your notes? NO!! Don't make me get that Silence Glaive!!...ahem...anyway) It was practically a Mokona fanfic!! I did like
 the Venus/dominatrix thing....hehehehe....That came from one of Venus's 
 moves in the Sailor Moon S 3DO game. Useful though, ne?
 I loved adding the actions to the two musical numbers...okay, those had to be
 the best parts!  
 A warning to all though...spell check FREQUENTLY!!! This thing was a major
 pain in the @#$ to grammer (I really hope you misspelled GRAMMAR on purpose, Kathryn.) (Beib mich!) what with all those 'bu' and 'fu' things.
 That and 'shine'...and other misc. noises like 'ahh' and 'um', 'uh', and
 of course Mercury with her editorial 'mmmmphhhhmmhhhmm' now and then.
 Umm....I'd probably do it again if asked. Hmm...do they pay for this sort
 of thing? (hey, at least I'm use---never mind. Personal SMS tangent right
 there, gomen! ^_^)
 Ja ne and arigato!! Atashi wa going to sleep now...



