I'm sympathizing with Gertchen (I'm sorry I don't know your handle)here.
  I posted my fanfic here hoping that I could get some critiqueing, 
and haven't heard nothing except for 2 messages, 
(and it didn't even involve my story).  
I know alot of stories get posted so getting an immediate response was not 
expected but come on someone's got to see this stuff.  
I personally read the fic Gertchen wrote and I thought it was pretty 
good, it's only 2 charpters (counting 0), but you know there's 
something is coming but its not preditable.  I was surprised how 
Gert described the astronauts tension before the launch, that was 
great.  Now that wasn't so hard, let's give it a try, eh?

the (hoping that he won't too much slack for this) brian