well well seems like i finally bothered to write a fic.. after lurkin
fer the past year
reading everything i could get my hands on (and writing a few) i have
finally decided
to return the favor by actually finishing one.. (or at least getting
beyond paper notes).
well standard disclaimer and stuff.. on with the fic
RANMA � FANFIC: OF HONOR WON AND TIME LOST prelude
[Tendo Dojo, present]
Soun Tendo sits in his dining room crying while reading a postcard
featuring a panda on
it's front.
Soun: Finally! how long i have waited... and finally he's coming..
Soun (yelling): Kasumi! Nabiki! Akane!
[Somwhere in China, 2 weeks ago]
A furious Shampoo stalks off into the distance as Genma and Ranma cower
behinf an umbrella
Ranma: This is getting ridiculous..
Genma: Son, you may be right... maybe it's time we went back to Japan.
Just one thing
i have to do... we leave in the morning.
later that day Genma sits writing on the back of a postcard;
Tendo, am coming from China with Ranma.
Stopping to see Nadoka first. Will be there ..
Genma stops for a second and scrawls a date two weeks from then.
[Tendo Dojo, present]
Soun is seated across teh table from his three daughters.
Soun: a good friend of mine is coming here with his son. If one of you
were to marry him
our dojo would be secure.
Akane (yelling): You expect us to marry someone we don't even know?
Nabiki: Calm down Akane, you never know he might be REALLY cute.
Kasumi: I hope he's older than me.. younger men bore me.
Nabiki: So Daddy is he cute?
Kasumi: Is he older?
Soun: I don't know.
Nabiki: You don't know?
Soun: I've never met him.
Akane (thinking): Oh please...
Soun flips over the postcard
Soun: He should be here any minute.
Suddenly there's a noise from the front door.
Nabii: It must be Ranma!
Soun: Saotome! My friend!
Both take off running dow the hall
[Saotome home, 2days ago]
Genma: Ranma.. promise me you'll go to the Tendo Dojo... it is all i
ask... hopefully
you can restore my honor.
Nadoka: are you ready?
Genma: yes dear..
Genma drops to his knees and removes a tanto blad from it's wrapping,
with a final glance
at his son he plunges it into his torso ripping it upwards and guiding
it to make a
gruesome from of the letter Z. As Genma completes it Nadoka draws her
katana and relieves
him of his pain with a sigle swoop of her blade.Genma's corpse sinks to
the ground his
lifblooding still flowing from the stump that used to support his head.
Nadoka then turns
to Ranma
Nadoka: My son... I cannot hold you responsible... But I too am
accountable... I made
him make that stupid promise and because of it, I have been widowed...
Ranma will you be
my kaishaku? I must remove this stain from my honor.
Ranma: Mother you..
Nadoka (interupting): it must be done.. be strong my son..
Nadoka drops to her knees as Ranma takes up her sword, like a pair of
mimes the two
wordlessly re-enact the bloodshed of moments before.
[Saotome home, a half hour later]
Ranma sits at a desk, pen in hand, writing a letter as tears stream down
hi face.
Ranma: Mother.. Father... I will bring honor to our name..
[Tendo Dojo, present]
Akane and Kasumi are still stting at the table when Nabiki and Soun walk
back into the
room with a slight air of disappontment about them.
Akane: so where's....?
Nabiki (interrupting): just the mailman
Akane: so i guess we're off the hook then... at least for awhile
Unnoticed by the two sisters, Soun has started reading a letter. Nabiki
is the first to
take notice.
Nabiki: what's it say Daddy?
Soun just sits there in silence, re-reading the letter. Nabiki get's up
and starts
reading over his shoulder.
Nabiki: 'Will come as soon as possible. Be prepared' signed Ranma
Saotome....
END OF PRELUDE
well i hope u enjoyed this even if it's more of a teaser than anything
else... sens all
c&c to prpchan@hotmail.com or u cna talk to me on irc.. usually on
DALnet #anime and
sometimes Terratron at #ranma! Part 1 is already complete or most of the
way anyways..
just havta wait till i'm bored enough to type it up but after that it
might take awhile
cause i'm not sure where i want to go with this.. it has too many
possiblities.. the
present format i'm looking at would have it go about 10 chapters with
all the cast
appearing but i'll burn that bridge when i get to it....
P-R-P-Chan
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