On Sat, 26 Jul 1997, Chris Kelly wrote:
Well, for the first fic you have posted this certainly doesn't show it.
The characters all stay in character, and the walling out Shinji does is
a real problem which you both explained and managed to overcome in a
fashion very much like that of the actual episodes. The only thing to
suggest would be what happened with the fields. Did all three become
one, or were the other two able to pass through Shinji's?
All three became one... And as such, it was like the field wasn't there,
relative to the evas.
It becomes more interesting when you find out what the AT field is... But
that isn't until late in the series. If you've seen it, you'll know what I
mean.
Tom