Which angel is this?  or are you creating a new one?

A new one, and the author hasn't seen or is ignoring episode #14.

I've seen the entire show multiple times. It doesn't fit in the
continuity, but I try not to alter the continuity too much.

well if you don't alter continuity in any way, you have a carbon copy of
the series.  Thats why we write fics, to alter continuity, but not too
much to lower the believeability level :)

Now for my own comment---I think this story needs a little

more---perhaps

the dream sequence needs to be a little clearer in point, or

something.

You may be right... It's just that making it _too_ clear would ruin
it,
and could possibly spoil the series.

ya, but I liked the dream sequence.  it was vague like the original
series.  it fits well.