In a message dated 97-07-25 04:20:29 EDT, you write:

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The face looks great, but the body is too sculpted, I think, anyway.  Anime
girls, even well muscled ones, tend have a smoother look than you get with
the western style of art.  Thicken the limbs ever so slightly and take out a
lillte of the detail and it will make it look more Anime-ish.  

Don't get me wrong, I think it looks good, but you asked for c & c, ( I hate
trying to criticize someone else's work... I'm always afraid I'll make
soneone mad at me.)

By the by, I thought the perspective of Toraneko was well written and enjoyed
it very much!