Hello ,

I've just read your stories and i think you have a winner here. The best
part was the POV of Mouko in the intro. IMHO i think that the story will
stay good if you can resist the urge to "humanize" Mouko. Try to leave
her as she is ..a tiger that turns into a girl.

Mouko is probably the most dangerous  shaper in Nerima. Even Tarou and
Rouge have to get into their changeforms to fight well.Mouko 
's trueform is that of a Bengal tiger and her changeform is a human girl
with tiger atributes. How can the others compare? A cat ,pig and duck??

I predict major fight scenes as the others become aware of her. For
their safety they had better be careful around  her..if she fights ,she
will not be holding back and will try to kill her opponent.

Well those are my comments so far feel free to e mail me back and thanks
for your time.

ps i loved the goat scene ..it drove home to the Tendous that despite
her appeaarance and personalitty Mouko is a tiger and a seasoned
huntress .Cant wait till she meets p-chan!

As always con3@webtv.net