Toraneko "Out of the Jungle" Part 1

		first of all, I would like to say that this story is allready showing 
its promise as a good story with an unique character which has just as 
much depth as one created by Takahashi.  This is a much more involving 
story than the Yohko 1/2 one, and I think it might do you some good to 
work more on this one.  You managed to surprise me with the fact that 
mouko is NOT interested in Ranma as a fiancee, the direction of the 
first episode sort of pointed in that direction.
Keep up the excellent work!
				A few questions and suggestions to consider.

1>	Ranma knows that Mouko is a TIGER for pete's sake, so why isn't he 
scared shitless?  She certainly is very feline, and that is one of the 
things which turns him off of Shampoo.

2>	But we can tell he is't about to go into the Neko-ken mode though, so 
what will Mouko do when he does?  He would be a lot like her in that 
case, and they would probably have a very good romp. 

3>	Now to most people, who would be the logical male to hook her up 
with.  There are three main choices.  Kuno is off the bat from the 
start, and Mousse is too obssesed with Shampoo.  Naturally everyone 
thinks of Ryoga, who is a nice guy, probably as strong as her, and Ranma 
wants him away from Akane anyway.  But it doesn't feel right.  I can't 
shake the image of Mouko seeing the pig inside Ryoga just like she did 
the monkey in the martial artist and laughing to tears at him, probably 
revealing his secret to Akane too.

4>	Finally, Mouko is a Tiger fighter, and Ranma's personal style is 
Tiger like, fast and deadly, and his chi-blast is called the Tiger's 
Roar.  Did she teach him back in china, or will she help Ranma get in 
touch with the Tiger in his style, or even inside his neko-ken?

Hope I don't sound too commanding.
																								Thank's for listening.
																												 Fizban

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