I took a little break from my Yohko 1/2 story to write this quick little
thing. I'd love to hear some C&C! You should notice the style change a
little as the story progresses. The sentences are often short and
simple at the beginning on purpose to reflect Mouko's simple thought
process at the beginning. Anyway, before I start giving anything away,
her it is:
She was hungry again. The immutable laws of nature were that the
strong lived at the expense of the weak; that life was a continuous,
bloody struggle against your competitors, your prey, the elements.
That was survival. She was a survivor. She knew she was one of the
strong, and she reveled in the power she had over her prey. Her strong,
graceful body glided through the dense forest. Her stomach growled at
her; expressing its need for attention, but she simply growled back at
it. Her orange coat with its jagged black stripes hid her from view as
she stalked her would be prey.
Her surroundings were breathtaking, but her simple animalistic mind did
not comprehend the beauty. A narrow valley, its steep rocky walls
covered with the green on the dense forest, was where her quarry liked
to hide. There, out in the open, where it was difficult for her to
rush. She didn't mind. She was much faster than the lumbering black
and white beast anyway. She almost didn't need to stalk the thing. She
knew it could be strong if cornered, but that if she could frighten it,
it would simply run. She could catch the beast at any time. She only
had to make sure and not fall in one of the many pools that covered the
valley floor.
Up ahead she could see the black and white markings of her prey.
Lumbering along among the pools, chewing contentedly on the tender
bamboo shoots that occasionally were left to grow for a few days, the
creature had no idea that its end was near. She was on her belly now,
inching forward more silently than the inching of the clouds across the
sky. She was much closer now; the grass was beginning to offer scant
cover for her. Still, the lumbering beast did not detect her. She
tensed again, waiting for just that perfect moment.
Then she charged. She sprang forward with all the explosive power of
her massive muscles. A few quick bounds, and she was on the creatures
back, holding it tightly with razor-like claws while her wickedly curved
teeth bit into its neck. In its shock, the creature lurched forward,
dislodging her. But she knew she had fatally wounded the creature. She
rolled on the ground, careful not to fall in any of the pools and rose
to her feet. The black and white creature tumbled into the water, and
struggled for a few moments. It was too hurt to struggle very hard,
though, its neck severed by the tiger's bite. It couldn't keep its head
above water to even breath it's last few gulps of air. Within mere
moments, the panda had drowned in the pool.
The tiger ruefully gazed at its prize, sinking in the depths. It was
too deep for her to
go in and retrieve it, although, like all tigers, she was a powerful
swimmer. She jumped to the other side of the pool, looking at it from
another angle. She was feeling very frustrated with the situation, but
it appeared that nothing could be done. She leaped again, to back up
and look from afar. That's when the accident happened. Her rear foot
slipped, and she found herself tumbling into one of the pools.
She didn't know it, but her accident was observed. The experienced
Guide, who had seen the curse affect countless individuals made a mental
note of where the panda drowned. He raised his eyebrow in surprise as
the tiger fell into another pool. Never before had a tiger been cursed,
at least as far as he knew. He turned away in amusement as the tiger,
now a naked and confused girl, climbed out of the water, wet and
bedraggled and bounded into the jungle.
She was hungry again. The immutable laws of nature were that the strong
lived at the expense of the weak; that life was a continuous, bloody
struggle against your competitors, your prey, the elements. That was
survival. She was a survivor. But she was no longer one of the strong.
This weak new body she found herself in was barely able to perform the
simplest tasks. She had no claws on her hands, although her new fingers
were extraordinarily good for grasping. Her weak teeth would barely cut
through meat. At least, she was able to learn to use her front paws
much more, and even was starting to learn a rudimentary way to walk on
just her hind feet.
She found a small deer this time. Since her new body was a bit slower,
and much less powerful than before, she had to be extra careful as she
stalked her small prey. She was able to creep until she was so very
close to the deer, then she leaped explosively at it. She had learned
by now that her old hunting methods didn't work as well, but she had
adapted and learned new ones. Leaping on the deer's back, she grabbed
its head in her paws and twisted its neck. The deer fell quickly, its
legs still kicking convulsively for a few minutes, and the tiger began
her feast. It took her much longer to eat now. Her weak teeth had to
work so hard to cut through the deer's hide, and her mouth was so much
smaller than it had been.
Finally she was done. Like all cats, she was meticulous about her
cleanliness. Her smooth new tongue didn't get her nearly as clean as
her raspy tiger tongue, but she had learned to use water to clean
herself. She cocked an ear, but didn't hear any sound of running water.
Using her keen sense of smell, she was able to locate water to her
right. She slowly walked that way, enjoying the feeling of a full
belly.
She nearly gasped in awe as she came to the water. A spring welled up
from the ground, spilling its contents into a narrow stream. Steam rose
from the water as well. She had never seen a hot spring before, but
this one inrigued her. Eagerly, she stuck her hands in to clean her
face.
Before she knew it, she had fallen back down on her paws. She had
returned to her powerful tiger body! Leaping in the air in her
excitement, she pawed at butterflies, ran in circles and smiled to
herself at her new found discovery. How wonderful it was to be herself
again!
She was hungry again. The immutable laws of nature were that the
strong lived at the expense of the weak; that life was a continuous,
bloody struggle against your competitors, your prey, the elements.
That was survival. She was a survivor. It hadn't taken long for the
rains to come, and for her to return to her weak form. At times, when
she tired of her new body, she would come back to the hot springs, but
to her surprise, she was doing that less and less lately.
Things had been happening to her, while in this new form. She had
never been able to think so clearly before, and new horizons opened up
to her imagination. So this is what it was like to be a two-leg?
Always thinking, always aware of your place? She realized that as a
tiger, she had no comprehension of anything beyond the moment. The
longer she stayed in this two-leg body, though, the easier it became to
remember, to solve problems. She discovered the use of rudimentary
tools, one day, when she threw a heavy stone at a fleeing deer. She had
never been happier.
But her new-found knowledge also made it very clear to her that she was
no longer a true tiger. She had moved beyond that, and now understood
so much more about the world. She still followed tiger social norms;
carefully watching the boundaries of her territory. But one day she
grew curious and wondered what other two-legs did. She knew of a place
where two-legs lived, and like a flash, she bounded off to discover what
she could of her new brothers.
Although she didn't know it, she had discovered a martial arts dojo.
She watched in amazement as three men carefully practiced their forms.
They were followers of kung fu, and they all seemed to have a different
form. She watched closely, and one of them seemed very familiar to her.
She edged a little further out onto the limb she was hiding in to see
better.
Yes, it was familiar. These men were imitating animals. So that was
how they made themselves stronger! By using their intelligence and
imitating the animals around them. One man reminded her of a snake.
She had no interest in learning any techniques from him! Another man
reminded her of the little monkeys who chattered above her in the trees.
She almost laughed at him; his antics faithfully mimicing the little
hairy two-legs. But monkeys were also weak, and she wanted to learn to
be strong.
The final man held her attention like nothing before. His movements
reminded her of herself, her mother, her brothers. Yes, this man was
imitating a tiger. Here was a form she could learn. She carefully
studied his movements, trying to see how the application of her tiger
ways could be carried out in human form. Some of the forms she saw as
unnatural, and was able to improve on in her head.
Day after day, she would come back and watch the tiger two-leg. After
she watched him, she would retire into the forest and practice the
motions herself. She was surprised to find how easily they came to her.
She was stronger and much more agile than the man she was learning from.
Perhaps someday she would hunt him and eat him. The thought was bitter
to her for some reason. She stopped her routines and wondered why she
would no longer feel like eating a two-leg, at least while in two-leg
form herself. Perhaps for the same reason she would not eat a tiger in
tiger form. She put the thought out of her mind and continued
practising.
For a moment, she had felt something as she worked out. She was much
more in tune with nature than other two-legs, and this closeness had
almost sparked something within her. Ignoring the movements of the man
she had been studying, she closed off her mind except for this spark.
Searching into her soul, she struggled to find the link she was looking
for. She knew that if she could find it, she would truly be able to
master her mimicry of the tiger. She knew that power was in that spark,
if she could just find it again.
Slowly, the sounds around her faded. The chattering monkeys, the wild
cries of the birds, the gentle rustle of the leaves; all of it faded to
nothingness. The sights were next to go; the waving green fronds, the
dappled sunlight that managed to snake it's way down through the canopy,
the richly textured forest floor; all faded away to grey. She was one
with nature, now, aware of nothing but herself. Her own bright soul
shone in the emptyness, but she had not come looking for that. Like all
creatures of the wild, she was much more in touch with her soul than men
are anyway. No, she came looking for the link; the power that could
make her tiger-mimicing art perfect. And distantly twinkling at her,
she could sense that power.
She knew nothing of ki, of course. But when she saw this natural link,
she chased after it, pounced upon it and embraced it. A bright aura
began to glow all around, and she felt heady with the energy flowing in
her veins. It was her first experience with ki, and no one had ever
told her what could and couldn't be done. Her first thought was that
she could use it to change back to her tiger form at will.
She was disappointed to discover that this was not the case. But some
small changes were able to be made. Her weak teeth could grow into the
powerful fangs of her tiger form. Her pitiful nails could grow into the
sharp retractable claws of a cat. And most surprising of all, she found
she could release the ki into a powerful blast of pure energy. Her
first experience with this blew up a small tree, but she was a quick
learner, and the natural energy felt second nature to her. In time, as
she mastered her new techniques, she knew she was more poweful that ever
before in either form. She longed to challenge the tiger two-leg who
she had learned from!
She was hungry again. The immutable laws of nature were that the
strong lived at the expense of the weak; that life was a continuous,
bloody struggle against your competitors, your prey, the elements.
That was survival. She was a survivor. She was surprised to find that
her wandering had brought her back to the place it had all began. One
of the things she noticed was that she had become very introspective,
and often roamed high up in the tree tops without realizing where she
was going. She looked fondly at the place which had opened up this new
world to her. And was hit with a flash of deja vu.
Lumbering about the springs was another huge black and white creature.
Her pangs of hunger, unnoticed up until now, reminded her that she
hadn't eaten in a long time. She decided that it would be very ironic,
and quite to her taste, to hunt the beast successfully this time.
"Pops, you idiot! Stay away from those stupid springs!" Ranma still
hadn't come to terms very well with the accident they had yesterday.
She knew about how to temporarily reverse the curse now, but she still
seethed with anger at her father, who had deliberately thrown her into
one of the pools. But despite all that had happened, she still cared
for her father, and didn't want to see him fall in again. Who knew what
it would do this time!
Pushing her bright red bangs out of her eyes, she stormed out of the
tent to retreive Genma. "Don't try to pretend you can't hear me, Pops!
You can probably hear better as an animal anyway!" Genma slowly turned
his head to look at Ranma. _Gosh, I guess he's taking this all pretty
hard!_ thought Ranma as she saw the dejection on the panda's face. _I
better get him away from here before he does something _really_ stupid!_
She grabbed her fathers hairy arm and turned, trying to drag him along
with her. As she did so, she happened to look up, and what she saw made
her gasp in astonishment.
About a hundred feet up in the trees was a young girl. She was no
older than Ranma was, and just as slight. She looked to be very strong
and lithe, though, and she hopped down from the tree as if jumping off a
curb. Ranma gasped again as she realized that the girl was stark naked.
Her fiery orange hair was neatly pulled back behind her, and her
ice-like blue eyes burned into Ranma and Genma. With a bestial growl,
the girl pounced at Ranma.
She ducked out of way, but was surprised to see the girl recover and
turn so swiftly in midair. She roared in anger at him, and was bared
her teeth. Long poweful fangs kept Ranma at bay. Then the girl turned
and leaped at Genma. Sharp claws sprung from her hands and tore into
Genma's throat. Ranma screamed in terror as he saw the girl poised to
bite the panda.
"Pops! Do something! She's going to kill you!" Without thinking,
Ranma leaped into the furry fray and grabbed the girl, trying to
dislodge her from Genma's back. To her surprise, the girl was even
stronger than she was, and Ranma couldn't budge her. She roared again
and slashed at Ranma with her claws.
Genma finally bucked her off, and Ranma threw one of her poweful ki
attacks at her.
"Mouko Takabisha!" she shouted. The blast knocked the fiery haired girl
back against the trees, but she retaliated quickly by slamming Ranma
with a ki-blast of her own. Ranma forced himself to stand again and
face her.
Something seemed odd about the girl, as if she didn't want to fight
anymore. Ranma noticed it, and lowered his guard. The girl still
growled at her, but Ranma noticed that she seemed to relax a bit as
well. "Hey, Pop! Bring some hot water over here, will ya? I've got a
funny feeling about this girl!"
Ranma crept up to her, still smiling and trying to speak soothingly.
"Do you know how to speak?" she asked. "Japanese? Mandarin?
Cantonese?" Ranma tried every language he knew even a smattering of, but
the girl just looked confused. "You certainly are a mouko, aren't you?
A fierce little tiger!"
The girl looked at Ranma quizzically and tried to imitate her. "Mo-
ko..." she said. Her voice was surprisingly sweet and innocent
sounding.
"Boy, that's quite a change from your growling and roaring earlier.
Mouko." Ranma said again. "Mouko, why don't you come with us? We'll
get you something to eat, and help you figure out where you are and
where you want to go." The girl cocked her head at Ranma, then smiled.
Her wary attitude vanished and she bounded enthusiastically over to
Ranma. She put her arm around her, and led her towards the tent.
"Come along, my little toraneko. You sure are a wild cat! But I think
we'll be great friends."
Joshua Dyal
j-dyal@geocities.com
http://www.geocities.com/TimesSquare/Arcade/1958/
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