Okay
Thank you on your responses on both questions
but I didn't realize how many differant ways
you can say it. So I am going to use them both
in sentences so I can get it right.(Also consider these
sentences as micro teasers for my next fanfic!)

1.)"I failed you father," Sylia sobbed, as she felt the last 
bit of her spirit being ejected from her body."I failed you....."


2.)Sylia held the now empty pistol on the robed and hooded figure.* It
didn't even phase her!* she thought. She watched as the figure looked
down
at the eight closely placed shots in her chest. The figure then raised
her
hands and put them on the sides of the hood. Raising both her head and
hand
she pulled the hood back, revieling her face to Sylia. It was a face
Sylia
remembered well.
        " Mother?!" Sylia said with a look of complete shock.
       "Yes. It's me," she said "By the way, nice grouping of your
shots."


Hope you like it and this gets the answers I need.

David Lindquist
fido@rma.edu
MST 3000="I didn't know they still had landmines in Narnia."