Asuka slept soundly behind her closed door... come morning, she would

no doubt experience a considerable degree of trouble leaving her room,
though. Having your door epoxied shut could do that.<<

You know...I WAS going to complain on how you left out the bound and 
gagged part...but this is much better.  Call it poetic justice if you 
will.  (Can you tell I'm not an Auska fan? :-) )

Just one thing.  If you want (and if you can get away with it), you 
could add a line from The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy after Rei 
brings the...errr.... incident into the open.  I can just see that 
"terrible, ghastly silence" line in there.

The rest: good work, very high quality fic.  Keep it up.

Brian
(Yes, I am in the Shinji-Rei matchup camp)  :-)



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