Christopher Angel wrote:

yesterday, and Chapter 1 should be out tonight. The general idea is Ranma
&
Akane admit it, get married, and now it's Ryouga's turn to suffer.

	nice premise however he still has that pig girl I can't remember the
name of. A.... somthing.

The best I have (and I think it's pretty sad) is this:  Ryouga spent 7
years of his life chasing Ranma, right?  Well what if while he was
wandering, he happened to make an enemy of this one Russian man, who
happens to be a Martial Arts Hunter.

	Hmm I would rather put him as a fighter either for the pit areana (pit
fighter sega) ie russian mafia connections. or one of the otherwise
underground arenas. then you have an enemy that does not care if he
knees you in the balls but just wants to win. In any case, the main
problem is explaining how the other tracked Ryouga down in the first
place. and how Ryouga got that lost. . perhaps when he followed Ranma to
China? in any case, good lucj and hope you send it out soon.

	Q.