Onna: Red Side
Author's Notes: End of Act I
I really should have posted this after chapter six, which is the
official "end" of the first act, but I'll go ahead and post it now.
Response to this story so far has been fantastic! I'd like to thank
everyone who's given me comments and criticism.
A special thanks to Jorge Pratt, whose assistance and advice has been
consistently helpful throughout writing this first act. I hope to
continue to receive his woonderful advice and comments throughout the
remainder of the story.
Also, thanks to SKJAM! for not ripping the story to shreds ^_^
Cameo disclaimers: "Mizuno Ami" property of Takeuchi Naoko, Kodansha
Comics, Toei Animation.
*THE INJOKE TALLY*
I am lacing the story with various in-jokes and bad puns. Some are
obvious, some take a little more work to spot. At the end of each act,
in the author's notes, I'll keep a tally of how many are there, so
you can see if you've found them all.
The tally for act one is: 6
Chapter 7 begins Act II, and chapter 8 is coming soon! Ja mata ne!
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Ryodachi Kouma
"The Eternal Lost Lurker"
squn29a@prodigy.com
http://pages.prodigy.com/EtLostLurker
no da.