Tell me what you think,

        The dark aley, lit up with the sparks of sword colliding, suddenly
darkened even more as one of the combatants amied for a kill. Suddenly, as
if sencing danger the apparent victor turns to see somthing comming towards him.
        Richi had been having a bad day now it had turned to worst, not only
had this immortal managed to knok him down but was about to behead him. A
familiar buzzing sunsation hit his as his opponant loked away. richi saw a
blue figure walking towards him as he fainted
        "Mr are you okay" asked an semi accented voice.
        "What" asked  Richi as hee loked over to masters, 'my god what did
that to him'
        "Let me take you to My uncles dojo, My name is Sho"
If interst sparks I'll rwrite more, well I'll wrie more anyways
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