And finally, here's the revised Chapter 7.
I should be posting Chapter 8-beta tomorrow, provided RL stays out of
my way for the rest of the weekend.
I've received many requests for previous chapters. Unfortunately, due
to the temperamental nature of my mail server, this isn't convenient.
I apologize for anyone who has been inconvenienced by my reluctance
to provide chapters.
The entire revised story, through this chapter, is available in a one-
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Chapter 7, Section A: A World Away
A kind, weary woman trod exhaustedly into a beautifully styled and
decorated chamber in what was probably the most exquisite palace to
ever exist, and tiredly slumped into a plush, thronelike chair,
leaning forward onto the richly lacquered dark wood table. She
brushed locks of her golden hair out of her face, heaving a sigh.
Despite her exhaustion, she wore a smile as she glanced around the
room.
Decorating the walls were various sketches and painings of a young
woman, with sandy blond hair, and lively green eyes. In some, she
wore flowing, exquisite green dresses, and seemed to be dancing in
the painting. In others, she wore an unusual, yet beautiful green and
white armor, and carried an extremely long sword. In one painting,
only a thin layer of silken gauze clung to her body, as an unknowable
wind stirred her hair and rippled the fabric.
"I just finished that one this morning," said a deep, gentle voice
from behind her. She turned, and smiled at the young man who had
spoken. As usual, his long, greenish hair created a somewhat wild
frame around his weathered face. His face always saddened her a bit--
nobody as young as he was should have a face like that. The man's
visage had been darkened and chapped by the weather, and small scars
spoke of battles he had narrowly survived. The scar on the bridge of
his nose especially bothered her.
But, he never spoke of it, so she never felt the need to ask. She
was just thankful that he still lived, and was vibrant and strong...
and creative...
The young man dropped into another chair, and laid a pad on the
table. Selecting a charcoal pencil, he began carefully constructing
another of the myriad pieces of art he had been filling the palace
with ever since his return.
"So," he asked as he brushed the charcoal across the rough paper,
"Another exhausting day, sister?"
She nodded. "Yes, very exhausting. But worthwhile." With a bright
twinkle in her eyes, she said, "You won't believe what we got done
today, Ferio."
Ferio grinned. His sister was always happy when she returned to
the palace. "And what did the Pillar of Cephiro do today, hmm?"
Emeraude smiled happily. "We finally purged all the darkness from
the Forest of Silence."
Ferio's head snapped up, and he gave his sister an incredulous
look. "You're joking, right?"
Emeraude giggled and shook her head. "It's finally done. There is
no more Silence in that forest."
Ferio chuckled. "Unbelievable. You're sure it's really over this
time? We thought the forest was tamed when that stupid rock was
destroyed..."
Emeraude sighed. "Yes, I remember. We were all disappointed when
the Forest became just as dangerous again. But, thanks to my beloved,
we found a new home for the darkness of Cephiro."
Ferio blinked. "Oh?"
Emeraude nodded. "You know the Intangible Mountains? Well, it took
some doing, but we managed to transfer all the darkness from the
Forest of Silence into those mountains."
Ferio grunted an approval. "And since nobody could go into those
mountains even if they wanted to..."
"Nobody will ever be bothered by the monsters again."
Ferio laughed. "Sounds good."
"Yes, it will make many people very happy..." Suddenly, Emeraude
pitched forward onto the table, gasping. Ferio was immediately at her
side. "Emeraude! What's wrong?"
"I..." Tears of pain streamed from her eyes. "I'm not sure...I
feel so..." Emeraude became limp, her breathing shallow and ragged.
"NO!" Ferio shouted. Raising his head, he bellowed, "SOMEONE GET A
HEALER IN HERE, NOW!!!" Clasping his sister's hand, he whispered,
"You'll be alright, sister, I promise...you'll be just fine..."
Chapter 7, Section B: Pointless Loss: The Tale of the Magic
Knights
Once more, the group in the Nekohanten had all settled in a circle,
sipping tea. "So," Hikaru said finally, "Umi-chan, Fuu-chan...what
happened in Cephiro after Zagato sent me away?"
Umi and Fuu exchanged a nervous glance. "We'd best tell her. She
deserves to know," Fuu said.
Umi sighed. "Alright. Here goes..."
Two bitter, somewhat depressed Magic Knights recovered the Mashin
Windam, and battled more of Zagato's minions. Umi had become slightly
overzealous. Fuu had been very upset over how she'd changed.
The first apparent change was during the battle with Caldina, the
illusionist. Caldina's spell had ensorcelled Fuu, but somehow Umi had
resisted it. The surprised and enraged Caldina had fought visciously,
her daggers weaving around and between Umi's attacks, but the Magic
Knight distracted her with the Mizu no Ryuu spell, and while Caldina
made a wild dodge, Umi struck.
Caldina screamed as the blade of Umi's rapier pierced her through
the eye. Her spell immediately dissipated, and Fuu blinked herself
awake, then gasped as she saw what had happened.
Umi stood there, snarling at Caldina's twitching corpse. Her
rapier had pierced through the back of the illusionist's cranium, and
the body was slowly sliding down the blade.
Sadly, Fuu said, "I'll never forget that day. I still see in my
nightmares that woman's death throes..."
Hikaru gasped. Umi sighed.
"When we finally got to Zagato," Fuu continued...
The battle was not going well. Zagato had his own Mashin, and the
Knights were wearing down trying to defend themselves.
"Fuu, I have an idea," Umi said as they fell back a bit. "Let's
try to combine our magic."
Fuu, inside Windam, was doubtful. "I don't know...my attack magic
isn't very powerful..."
"It's worth a shot, right?" Umi asked.
Concentrating, Umi and Fuu released their powerful Wind and Water
magic, creating a Tidal Wave, which slammed Zagato into the wall.
While the priest was down, Umi lunged forward with her sword. Zagato
managed to roll to the side, but the blow pierced his shoulder.
Suddenly, Emeraude's voice filled the chamber. "NO!!!!" Zagato's
shoulder began to glow with a bright light. When the light faded, he
was healed, although he still grimaced as if in pain.
Umi and Fuu looked up incredulously. "That was the Princess...why
did she just do that?"
Suddenly, Emeraude, resplendent in her white dress, golden hair
spilling down to the floor, appeared between Umi and Zagato.
"Do not harm him. Please."
The Mashins returned to their places in the Magic Knights'
ornaments, and Umi frowned. "Princess, how else are we to rescue you?
"
The Princess shook her head sadly. "You don't understand. I
imprisoned myself. I called you here because I can not serve Cephiro
as I am now. My life must be ended."
Fuu and Umi gasped. Fuu said, "I don't understand. What is wrong?
"
Zagato stood, deactivating his own Mashin, and said, "She's in
love, and she thinks it's bad for Cephiro."
The two Knights looked at the princess, who bowed her head. "It is
true. I love Zagato. But I also love Cephiro. It is my will that
holds this world together. If I cannot devote my entire being to this
world, then what will become of it?"
Umi scowled. "Wait a second. You're saying you want to die because
you're in love and you think you can't be a good Princess to these
people, to this world, because of that?"
Emeraude nodded.
Umi snapped. "That's the STUPIDEST thing I have ever heard in my
life!"
Fuu nodded. "She's right. Princess Emeraude...do you deny your
love for Zagato? Are you ashamed of it?"
Emeraude shook her head sadly. "I cannot deny what is in my heart.
"
"Then," Fuu continued, "Do you deny your love for Cephiro?"
Emeraude gasped as if struck. "Never!"
Umi knew where this was going. "Then why? Why do you think you
have to die?"
"Because...because I cannot be the Pillar this world needs, if my
heart yearns for one man..."
"You're wrong," Umi told her. "If you can't accept your love for
one man, if you can't say, 'Yes, I love this man,' then how can you
say, 'Yes, I love this world'?"
Fuu nodded. "Exactly. In our world, people who millions of lives
depend on fall in love, marry, and have children all the time. It
doesn't make you a weaker leader, and it doesn't mean you care less
for your people."
"If anything, it makes you stronger," Umi added.
"They are right, my love," Zagato said quietly. "You are being
foolish, to deny either myself or this world your beautiful spirit."
Emeraude fell to her knees and began to sob. "What--what have I
done? What...I almost did grave harm to this world...I've been
foolish..."
Zagato knelt beside her and embraced her. "It is alright, my love.
"
"So, it's over?" Umi asked.
Emeraude looked up, and nodded. "Thank you, Magic Knights. Thank
you. You have truly saved Cephiro."
Umi frowned. "Then send us back to our world."
Emeraude was saddened. "Yes, of course...I apologize for
everything I have put you through..."
Umi didn't answer, except to scowl. Fuu did not look particularly
pleased either.
Emeraude straightened up, and closed her eyes. A bundle appeared
in her arms, which she handed to Fuu. "Take these gifts with you as
you return to your world. Farewell, Magic Knights."
And then, just like that, they found themselves back on Tokyo
Tower.
Hikaru sat, stunned. "Emeraude...and Zagato..."
Soun closed his eyes. "Such hardships as are faced, all for one
person's fear of commitment..."
"Sounds like someone we all know," grumbled Akane, though less
spiritedly than usual.
Cologne closed her eyes. "It is, indeed, a sad tale. That a young
life be ruined, for such a silly thing."
Umi nodded. "I still can't get over it. All the things that
happened, everything we went through, everything Hikaru-chan went
through, all for nothing."
Hikaru smiled sadly. "Not true, Umi-chan. It wasn't all for
nothing. After all, you did save Cephiro..."
And with that, Hikaru moved apart from the group, slumped into the
corner, and began to cry.
Chapter 7, Section C: A Call For Help
Ferio, Zagato, Clef, Presea, Ascot, Mokona, and various attendants
and healers gathered around the bed upon which the comatose Emeraude
lay. A large, ugly purplish blemish had appeared upon her left arm.
One of the healers sighed, and shook his head. "I do not know the
cause of this."
Clef observed the blemish, and frowned. "Something very dark is
causing this illness. But what...?"
A courtier suddenly ran into the room, and knelt before Ferio.
"Forgive me, Prince Ferio, I know this is a terrible time, but
something dreadful has happened in one of the outlying towns."
Ferio, knowing that Emeraude was in the best possible hands,
addressed the messenger. "Alright, what's going on?"
"It's Bima. Everyone in the town has become very weak, the plants
and animals are dying, and the buildings are decaying. The sun no
longer touches that town."
Ferio rubbed his chin thoughtfully. "Only that town?"
The courtier nodded. "Yes, your Highness, but the darkness seems
to be slowly spreading."
Just then, the comatose princess groaned, and the blemish on her
arm expanded alarmingly.
As Ferio returned his attention to his sister, another courtier
entered the chamber and said, "Your Highness! The area of darkness
has spread into the outlying villages around Bima. It's getting worse.
"
At that, Clef looked up, and caught Ferio's gaze. "That darkness...
with people falling ill and things decaying..."
"It's like a blemish on Cephiro," Ferio finished.
The two of them stared at the slowly growing blemish on Emeraude's
arm. "A Blemish," they said as one.
"We need to find a cure, and soon," Ferio said. "If this continues,
it's more than her life that's at stake. It's this entire world."
With a loud "puu", Mokona suddenly vanished.
"Where's Mokona off to?" Presea wondered.
Nobody had an answer.
On a street in the heart of Tokyo, there was a sudden flash of
light, and a fat, white, rabbit-like creature with a jewel on its
forehead suddenly dropped to the pavement. Making a loud "puu" sound,
it bounced frenetically down the street, as if in search of something.
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