I prefer the version with the epilogue.  Kinda takes a funny, partly
bright, partly dark fanfic and gives it a touch of smuttiness that's
inappropriate, IMO.

Leave the changes, but dump the epilogue.  Again, just MHO.

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-Richard
sterman@sprynet.com

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