David Johnston wrote:
 

But then isn't the whole point of the story that nobody knows what
might be going behind Nabiki's facade?

	I would think so but the problem is that there's little or no impact
when we see her name. The story could have been about ANY character with
the same results. To actually pull this off would require either a decoy
or a character that we completely take for granted wouldn't think this,
like Kasumi, Akari or Asuza. Even then it would probably a decoy as
well.

	That doesn't mean this story isn't good, just that this aspect of it
fails to work totally. But the potential of this drives me and Gary to
ask more from the author.

(And the Moon was as blood, the Storms crashed and the Seas BOILED!)
(Typical, thought the Lobsters)  
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