On Sun, 6 Jul 97 18:17:02 -0400 (EDT), you wrote:

Frankly this is pretty dissatisfying. You haven't told us enough to
judge IC/OOC. We need to know what drove this character to suicide, what
was going through the character's mind.

As I said, first/last.

Take it this way if you want, but for the record, I was not saying that
this story ought to be trashed; only that it needed work.

Gary Kleppe
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