"It's so good to see you, little brother," Genma said smiling happily.

I think we discussed this already, but how can they be brothers if they don't 
share the same surname?

"Genma! You've raised a truly manly son! Nodoka must be so proud."

Speaking of whom, why isn't she here if this happens after vol 38 of Ranma? 
Everyone else from the Tendo Dojo is.

	The two continued to laugh loudly and long even as the glaring match

between Ukyou and Akane moved down from Defcon 5 to 'throwing dagger looks
at each other'.<<

A minor detail, but the Defcon sequence is in DESCENDING order. 5 is the most 
peaceful setting.

she would be surprised if it lasted more than a few seconds... She wasn't
disappointed.

Can't wait to see it.

I keep having this feeling that there's one other thing. But I can't remember 
what...