At 08:39 PM 7/2/97 -0400, you wrote:

This story is not finished. I'd love any C&C on what I have. I'm a bit stuck
at the moment. Please let me know what you think!

Heh... Ranma/Ryouga... one of the less likely couples, tho more attactive,
of the Ranma universe. 

Comments? It's good, and I like it! Of course, y'all know what I like =P

But, some people on the FFML don't know what Slash signifies. Warning before
the fic of something like (Warning! This fic contains Male/Male love...):
Kinda silly, I know, but that's what I did with mine. Also, you may want to
put in the title [Ranma] [Yaoi] [Lemon] or something like that...

OK. onto the story. Why? Just wondering. Are you going to explain later, or
is it just sex between Ranma/Ryouga? That's good too, but if that's all it
is, try putting [PWP] in the front- that is, Piece without point.. ^_^ 

I mean, Ryouga and Ranma, no matter how good they may be together- and they
are (lots of most powerful enemy/greatest friend stuff) are not, canon-wise,
meant for each other at all...

Ryouga gasped as Ranma's hand gripped his erection and

squeezed firmly.

Oh, and that _hurts_ a lot... Really, really a lot... grip and squeeze is
prolly not the best words... grasped, held? somethin like that...

Monica
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