On Wed, 2 Jul 1997 20:39:30 -0400 (EDT), Kasumi Hibiki wrote:

This story is not finished. I'd love any C&C on what I have. I'm a bit stuck
at the moment. Please let me know what you think!

I think it needs to be posted with [Lemon] and [Yaoi] tags, and maybe a
couple of others I haven't thought of.

(Well, you asked...)

Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
       http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics