This is an interesting concept.The knight sabers as 
vampires, predators of the night in a new sense. I can't 
decide if I liked this or not. The change over was to 
quick, with little or no sense of what they thought and 
felt as it happened. I also feel there should be a real 
expansion of their reactions both as a group and 
individually. How do they feel going among 
humans,especially former friends-like Mackie for example.
 One massive change in personality is that Nene is now the 
best fighter of the group while Priss now seems to need 
protection as she loses every fight she is in, a real role 
reversal, one I have trouble accepting.
 One thing I didn't like is Lecroi's fate, I think a 
different one would have helped. Maybe a match against 
Sylia.
 Still this was fairly well written , the grammer wasn't 
bad and the idea is good. On the  whole I would like to see 
more of this series.

Rick Robinson

rik@cfanet.com