A nice fic.  Although in some parts I think you may have had the 
characters a touch OOC. (In my opinion).  For example when Asuka was 
complaining about nothing to do and you had Shinji explode at her... 
well... Shinji... Shinji would probably be more prone to reprimand or 
mutter or murmur... oh well thats merely my opinion...

It was an enjoyable read though, and I look forward to seeing more in 
the future...

Kiyoshi
"Quod vindicta nemo magis gaudet quam femina"
"No one delights more in vengeance than a woman"
	Anonymous