Scott Jamison wrote:
An amusing, and somewhat chilling story.
Thanks.
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I think this would make a nifty intro to a full-length story,
as the two Ranmas try to figure out what happened and how to
get back to their proper worlds.
Other people have said this, too. It was never my intention to make
this a full-length story, but you never know. Certainly when I wrote
TOP, I never expected it to become a series of stories. We'll see; I'm
working on "Roses of Shadow" right now.
(more difficult for TOPma,
TOPma and TILma... hee! :D :D
This could lead to some nice character exploration as TILma
and TOPma learn how their lives could have taken drastically
different turns.
Yeah, this *would* be interesting. Certainly lots of room for TILma to
consider parts of his psyche he's never fully explored, and lots of room
for TOPma to consider the path not chosen.
And angst for Kentaro and Akane, faced with mates who
no longer love them as they once did...
Yeah, *that* would be difficult on them.
(and perhaps this fic could finally answer the burning
question, "what exactly does TIL-Akane do for a living?")
Hehehe. I wish I knew. Any suggestions?
Plus there's a built-in suspense level with the time factor.
The switch back has to occur before TOPma gives birth, or
even if the switch can be done, the baby (now a separate
entity) might not go with....
Yeah, I had thoughts along similar lines.
SKJAM!
:D Thanks for the interesting commentary, Scott.