An amusing, and somewhat chilling story.
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As far as I can tell, the switchover occured sometime during the
cooking process, when the two Ranmas synchronized movements, thus
explaining why neither of the caught any clues beforehand...
I think this would make a nifty intro to a full-length story, as
the two Ranmas try to figure out what happened and how to get back to
their proper worlds. (more difficult for TOPma, as she didn't *do*
anything to trigger it...)
This could lead to some nice character exploration as TILma and
TOPma learn how their lives could have taken drastically different
turns. (TOPma probably has gotten used to a much lower "wackiness" level
in her life, the curse being more or less satisfied with the
pregnancies...) And angst for Kentaro and Akane, faced with mates who
no longer love them as they once did...(and perhaps this fic could
finally answer the burning question, "what exactly does TIL-Akane do for
a living?")
Plus there's a built-in suspense level with the time factor. The
switch back has to occur before TOPma gives birth, or even if the switch
can be done, the baby (now a separate entity) might not go with....
SKJAM!