Subject: (c&c) Definitions of Hell by Richard Lawson
From: Scott Jamison
Date: 6/29/1997, 12:28 PM
To: Fanfic ML

	An amusing, and somewhat chilling story.

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	As far as I can tell, the switchover occured sometime during the 
cooking process, when the two Ranmas synchronized movements, thus 
explaining why neither of the caught any clues beforehand...

	I think this would make a nifty intro to a full-length story, as 
the two Ranmas try to figure out what happened and how to get back to 
their proper worlds.  (more difficult for TOPma, as she didn't *do* 
anything to trigger it...)
	This could lead to some nice character exploration as TILma and 
TOPma learn how their lives could have taken drastically different 
turns.  (TOPma probably has gotten used to a much lower "wackiness" level 
in her life, the curse being more or less satisfied with the 
pregnancies...)   And angst for Kentaro and Akane, faced with mates who 
no longer love them as they once did...(and perhaps this fic could 
finally answer the burning question, "what exactly does TIL-Akane do for 
a living?")  
	Plus there's a built-in suspense level with the time factor.  The 
switch back has to occur before TOPma gives birth, or even if the switch 
can be done, the baby (now a separate entity) might not go with....

SKJAM!