interesting concept, the story was a little slow in 

spots, 

mostly in the beginning. I liked Kasumi and Nabiki in 

yoour 

story especially well and I thought their martial arts 

(and 

Kasumi's omniscience) was very in character. The scene 
where Ryoga found Ukyoo was quite well done and the 

scene 

where Mouse and Ono talk was very good as was the 
discussion between Mouse and Cologne. Although there 

needed 

to be a transition scene since Mouse after saying he 

could 

not EVER kill anyone then went to the Tendo's to kill 
Ranma.

About killing the demon, a reflection requires three 

things 

something to reflect( which what you used to remove the 

demon by removing) light which removing should have at 
least weakened the demon and the mirror destroying this 

should have also removed the demon.

Rick Robinson

rik@cfanet.com

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