Subject: [C&C] [FY Fic] Always, Forever
From: Marisa Price
Date: 6/26/1997, 10:14 PM
To: Monica/Akira-chan
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

At 09:28 PM 6/26/97 -0400, you wrote:
This is a Fushigi fic where basically, Tamahome doesn't come into Miaka's
world, in any form- ie, they had to split up- no Taka, no Tamahome in the
real world, and no Majin, either ^_^;; C&C PLEASE...


Okay!!!

1. Loved it. Love all your stories.
2. Confused by it. So this is a parallel universe thing right? But are you
saying this happens after the last manga, or after the OVA-version where 
Miyaka and Tamahome are separated?
3. What's the deal with the ending?? I am a bit confused about that too ^^;
The ending being the two paragraphs with Mi-chan and the frog.
4. How could you let Tasuki-chan get beat up?? ^_^ heheh Sorry guys with
fangs are just the best !! ^_^
5. No da!
6. Basically, very well thought out. I think you got Miyaka right on. I 
really don't think she would have ever given up on Tamahome, just like
she never gave up on Yui-chan.
7. Everyone should read this story ^^

Take care and PLEASE keep writing!!!

Misa

P.S. Have you read the Please Save My Earth manga? Since you like CLAMP
and FY and all of that, I bet you would like it (it's one of my very
favorites).