Subject: Re: [FFML] Okay, here goes...one hou challenge
From: con3@webtv.net (Conrad o Whittle III)
Date: 6/25/1997, 1:30 PM
To: SQUN29A@prodigy.com (KOUMA RYODACHI)
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

An interesting story . Kuno becomes what he has chased,a cute girl. I've
seen a few fics on this and its always refreshing to read.

A sole nit-pick: Ranma is rude,Ranma is arrogant and Ranma is not
tactful but i thought that him spitting on Kuno-chan was not IC.

 Ranma does have* some* honor and i cant think of a situation in which
he would spit on a fallen foe and a *girl* at that.

Feel free to e me back.


As always con3@webtv.net