| Subject: Re: [FFML] Okay, here goes...one hou challenge |
| From: con3@webtv.net (Conrad o Whittle III) |
| Date: 6/25/1997, 1:30 PM |
| To: SQUN29A@prodigy.com (KOUMA RYODACHI) |
| CC: fanfic@fanfic.com |
An interesting story . Kuno becomes what he has chased,a cute girl. I've seen a few fics on this and its always refreshing to read. A sole nit-pick: Ranma is rude,Ranma is arrogant and Ranma is not tactful but i thought that him spitting on Kuno-chan was not IC. Ranma does have* some* honor and i cant think of a situation in which he would spit on a fallen foe and a *girl* at that. Feel free to e me back. As always con3@webtv.net