On Tue, 24 Jun 1997, Captain Jack wrote:

I was wondering if anyone has written a fib so disturbing, it even

	[fic?]

without permission.  So if you object to my using them, its too late so

	[it's = it is]

I'm Shinji Ikari

"Hello there, I'm Noriko Idohara."  The young woman in a white coat sat
opposite Shinji Ikari who was nervously looking around the room.

"I'm Shinji.  Shinji Ikari.  What is this place?  This isn't the NERV
hospital."

		
	[Suggest that the repetition of 'I'm Shinji' is a bit of a 
distraction. Perhaps the first line, the title of the story(?), be 
changed to something like "Call me Ishmael".  A good classic reference. ^_^
 

Shinji starts to calm down as he answers her question.  "Well, its been
eventful.  Ever since my mother died, its been hard.  We had to keep

		[it's = it is]

	Good story.  Is it a one-shot, or do you plan on expanding it?

S h a z o r n				No, I'm not an otaku!
<rayburn@cc.umanitoba.ca>		But I'm working on it... ^_^;