Hey I need some C&C!  I've posted about 2/3 of what's written at
my archive site: http://www.geocities.com/tokyo/temple/1790/index.html as
a teaser, and am still writing.  Please give me a little help!

Keep in mind it's a little rough so I can work with suggestions.  Thanks!

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