At 01:17 AM 6/23/97 -0400, you wrote:

A little bit of pathos, a little bit of fun, a dash of humor and
a smidgen of intrigue...  

Nice recipe, Ryo-Oni.  This would be a great fic to continue.  Yes, I
can see you were rushing the ending, since there is *no* ending
to the 'fic.  As a one hour fic, I give this a C, since there was a climax, but
no denouement.  As a part of a larger fic, I give it an A for excellent
exposition and motiviation.  Keep up the writing.

Ryo-Oni (!new persona!)
The Spirit Ogre of the Jurai fleet
spyro@abac.com