| Subject: [FFML}{FIC} SHORT STORY hour challenge BEGINNINGS |
| From: Richard Robinson |
| Date: 6/23/1997, 10:33 PM |
Reply-to: rik@cfanet.com |
As Ranma landed in the pond again,she began to get angry after all she hadn't done anything wrong - all she had done was to say hello Akane! Then she got sent straight up by way of the Tendo Hammer Express. Before she could get inside to talk to Akane,Shanpoo came out of nowhere and glomped her then when she had peeled Shampoo off Kodachi jumped down and attacked her trying as usual to kill her, All this happening in front of Akane, who leaned out and said I hope you're happy you pervert, you honorless piece of trash, you and your four fiances,you no brained idiot. Getting really angry Ranma threw Kodachi about a half mile up and out. She then stalked in the kitchen and stomping up to Akane she said listen if you don't get control of that temper I won't have you as a fiance or a friend. I like Nabiki and Kasumi but you are getting to be a real pain to be around. She then left the room and went upstairs figuring to get some hot water from the bathroom on the way. Akane just stood there and shook so angry she couldn't move let alone speak. After afew minutes she turned to her sister and said did you hear that-She had the nerve to say that to me! Kasumi just stared and said I wonmdered how long it would take for Ranma to get angry the way you have treating him. I am surprised it didn't happen a long time ago. As Akane stared she added frankly I amd amazed Ranma hasn't moved out before this. The next morning before Ranma went into the bathroom he carefully checked for the occupied sign not seeing it he went in and began to prepare for his morning bath, when Akane jumped out of the tub and swinging her mallet knocked Ranma out of the room. Okay that's it, Pop I am leaving are you coming with me or are you staying here with these Tendo's. Going to his room he carefully packed his stuff and going into a sealed bag he pulled out about aten thousand dollars in travelllers checks and going to Nabiki's room knocked on the door. When she opened it he handed her the checks saying here these plus what you made off of me should covber all the expenses plus a reasonable price for room and board. Going back to his room he finished packing. Going uop to his father, he agaain asked are you coming or not Pop? His dad shook his head and held up a sign what about the promise you would marry into the Tendo family. Yelling as loudly as he could "everybody come here Now" RAnma exoplained that he planned to leave unless somebody other than Akane wanted to marry him NOW! Both girls shook their heads no. SO Ranma left and going to see his last fiancee told Ukyou that he was leaving Nerima permantly today. Ukyou ,no fool didn't argue she just packed the esessentials and said "WE'RE going" . And that was the last anybody in Nerima ever saw of Ranma Saotome or his fiancee. Rick Robinson rik@cfanet.com comments welcomed shucks any thing (almost) will be welcomed this was my addition to the hour challenge. I know it needs a lot of work but what did you think of it as a beginning. this was a concept I have had in back of my mind for a while. Ranma getting fed up and walking out with his best friend going with him. copyright R. Takahashi and viz video and probably other people as well. characters borrowed and or used without permision in order to show my thoughts and opinions