Greetings and salutations people! I've been lurking around for a
few days and decided now would be as good a time as any to participate in
the ML. Here is my submission for the second one hour writing drill. I
chose to do a fight scene, rather than a love scene. Let me know how you
like it! If I decide I like this I might even add it as a future
installment to my fanfic. If anyone wants to check out my work, it can be
found at:
http://www.geocities.com/sunsetstrip/club/2050/fanfic.html
All feedback is appreciated! 

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	Ranma and Akane approached the school, surprised to find the
usual gang was not waiting for them. Ranma looked a bit uncomfortable,
but then again, he always looked uncomfortable when he wasn't fighting. A
single red rose dropped at Akane's feet and Kunou approached them from
the side. 

	"Hey Kunou! Where's the crowd? I was looking forward to my
morning workout!" Ranma taunted.

	"Silence, fiend! Today you shall learn the true meaning of pain!
I shall smite thee!" Kunou lunged forward and started his rapid strike
technique, catching Ranma in the shoulder and knocking him a step back.
"Kunou, when are you gonna learn? You can't beat me! All I have to do is
break your little toy and your finished! Watch!" Ranma leapt forward,
tore the bokken from Kunou's hands, and cleanly broke it over one knee.
The gathering crowd began to murmur. Nabiki walked through the crowd,
taking bets on who would win. As usual, no one chose Kunou. Nabiki upped
the odds to 10:1 but everyone still refused to choose Kunou. Nabiki sat
down against a tree, picturing with great dismay the loss she was going
to take.

	Back at the fight, Ranma tossed the two broken bokken pieces to
the ground and turned to Kunou. "Do you yield Kunou? You know you don't
have a chance. At least save me the trouble of being late for class and
admit defeat now!"

	Kunou laughed at Ranma's show of bravado. Nothing could save him
now, Kunou thought. 

	"I will not yield! I will defeat you without my trusty bokken!
And you will pay dearly for the irreparable damage you caused, not only
to my bokken but to the mind of Tendo Akane! Prepare yourself Ranma!
TENSHIN AMAGURIKEN!"

	Ranma's smile disappeared as his chest was struck 160 times in
the span of a minute. Ranma staggered back and looked at Kunou, who was
still laughing. "How the hell? The only one who could've taught him that
would be...Cologne!" Ranma jumped and landed beside Kunou.

	"HIRYU SHOTEN HA!" Ranma yelled, bracing himself for the
impending whirlwind which never came. Ranma looked up to find Kunou still
laughing. "He isn't generating any hot ki...He's not angry at me? How can
that be!" 

	"BAKUSEI TENKETSU!" Kunou shouted, striking the ground with his
finger. A giant crater opened under Ranma, causing him to fall. Kunou
laughed once again at Ranma's inability to match him blow for blow. Ranma
climbed out of the hole and got to his feet. "Man...No matter what I do I
can't get to him! I can't even faze someone with that level of
confidence." Ranma blinked. "Confidence? Oh god, please tell me Cologne
didn't..."

	"MOKO TAKABISHA!" Kunou screamed as the air around them both
turned white. 

	Ranma awoke in a cold sweat. "Thank god...it was just a
dream...". He sat up and found himself staring into the crater formerly
known as Furinkan High. Ranma stood up and realized he had been sleeping
on the ground outside the school. "Sleeping or unconscious?" he wondered.
He looked at the smoldering remains of Furinkan High and realized it
wasn't just a dream. Kunou had single handedly leveled Furinkan High.
"Cologne you idiot..." Ranma thought to himself as he collapsed back on
the ground. "Teaching the Moko Takabisha to someone too stupid to realize
when he loses. Kunou's inflated confidence will be the death of us
all...". Ranma once again passed into unconsciousness.


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Aoi Ikazuchi: Sole member of the KSBRWtHAURFAVA
and now a member of the KFC: "YAY KUNOU!" eh?
Kunou Tatewaki: God's gift to the anime universe!
"Hito yonde Furinkan Koukou no Aoi Ikazuchi!"
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"Some people never go crazy...What truly boring lives
they must lead..." (WASP)
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