On Sun, 22 Jun 1997, RPM - acct 3/5 wrote:
RPM was good enough to forward this to me. :)

                           Tenchi Wars

                     Episode XIV: A New Hope

	I won't ask.

14:the OVA series ends on 13. :) 

	I would imagine you would like to keep a little bit of the Good/Evil
clash here. Why not change the Tsunami to the Souya?

Because the Soja is 1) Kagato's flagship, and 2) not as powerful as the
Tsunami. :)

	You, by no means have to listen to me, but along the same lines as
above, it has never been completely deemed that Tokimi is evil.  Why
not change who the Emperor is.. someone who is more commonly referred
to as evil, like ... I dunno, Clay or something. (Or maybe Azuza..
:))

Clay? Clay is Moff Tarkin. Tokimi is evil, in this, for my purposes.
Remember, this is not Tenchi Muyo nor Star Wars, exactly. :)  

	Thats strange ... Katago didn't ask for Transmissions, he asked for
plans.

Heh.  Ah, continuity errors. However, this section's dialog, except
for names, was written exactly as Star Wars.

programming chip.  With a whisper, she sent him back to Azaka, then

	While I'm here, I might as well say that plans don't really work for
Tsunami.  I mean ... Plans for a Tree?? How about something really
dangerous to Tsunami, like maybe Ryouko's gems?

Again; this is mostly Star Wars and some Tenchi. It will fluctuate. 
Nothing is as it seems, here. :>

	I know what you said about it being just a port from the actual Star
Wars script, but how about changing the planet names as well as the
character names. Earth instead of Tantooine, Jurai instead of
Alderaan or maybe Yavin, or even Courscant.

That was a total slip. My fault.

	Zero? A lowley commander? Nah. Try Boba Fett! :)

Zero in this case is Zero, Clay's assistant bot. Not Zero-Ryouko. :)

	THis is actually a very good job at mixing the Tenchi Muyo and Star
Wars universes. I await the next part, see how you handle this
situation.

Yep. :)

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