I think that if this person can come up with a good reason 
for being attacked by Ranma. This would make an interesting 
series. Frankly I would like to see some Revenge TYPE fics 
that don't have anything to do with the Revenge fic wars.
A nice self insertion fic where the author has reason to 
get in a major fight with Ranma but not part of a large 
multi-authored series would be a refreshing change.
 This was a little slow but built nicely and the author 
seems to be a good writer. There wasn't any action but the 
charactewas interesting I don't think I have ever seen a 
would-be transexual sprinkled with Jhusenkyo Drowned girl 
spring water before and that in itself is an interesting 
idea and the fact that (his) her family is so upset that 
(s)he will change back even though she would rather stay a 
she makes for some intiging possibilities.

E Robinson
Rick Robinson

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