Here's my contribution to the second part of the One Hour Challenge by
Megane 6.7:
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*Where am I?* Ryouga thought. The last thing he remembered was the
feeling of shock as his body fell to the ground. He looked around- it
was pitch dark. *What happened?* he thought.
"Is it nighttime already?" he wondered aloud.
"Uhm, you've got your eyes closed," a voice answered.
Ryouga opened his eyes. A pair of big ,black eyes stared back.
"Ahh!" he yelled
""Whoa! Calm down!" the newcomer said.
Ryouga calmed down and looked at the person who was addressing him. She
was a beautiful young girl with short, cropped blueish hair, big
gorgeous black eyes, and a refreshing smile. He just gaped. In his view
his eyes were not large enough. A single though crossed through his
mind, albeit in three parts:
* She. Is. Beautiful. *
It was after a few moments into his mental wanderings that he noticed
that the goddess was doing something. Talking to him, actually. He was
barely able to catch the last words and all that came out of him was ,
"Uh?"
A hearty laugh broke him out of his reverie. "Ha ha, Ryouga, what's the
matter? Was that wall harder than your head?" Ranma taunted. Ryouga
turned his head and saw Ranma laughing at him. Akane was standing next
to him.
*Now I remember...We were out in the street...I was trying to hit Ranma
after he had threatened to tell Akane my secret... and then something
hit me...*
"I said, are you all right?" the angel asked.
"I, uhm, yeah, I think so," he said checking for missing limbs and such,
"but what hit me?"
"Oh, I'm so sorry... I was walking down the street when you came
running, tripped with my foot, and slammed yourself into that wall.
You're ok, right?"
"Don't worry about Ryouga, miss, his head is as hard a ton of bricks.
Not an amazing feat considering it is _filled_ with a ton of bricks."
Ranma said.
Ryouga's distraction turned to anger. He stood up, facing Ranma, and
said, "That's it, Saotome, I'm gonna smack that dumb head of yours and-"
"Oh, please don't fight! I feel it is all my fault," the girl said as
she reached for Ryouga's arm to stop him.
What Ryouga felt was estatical bliss as her hand touched his arm. His
face turned from a fangful facade of ire to drunkeness stupor.
This change did not go unnoticed to Ranma.
"Hey, Akane, did you notice how he's drooling at that girl?" Ranma
whispered to Akane.
Akane nodded, "Yeah... wow, I've never seen such a sudden change in
Ryouga..." She spoke up, "Excuse me, what's your name?"
The girl turned to face Akane. "My name is Ami Mizuno. What's yours?"
"I'm Akane Tendo, this here is Ranma Saotome, and that's Ryouga Hibiki,
" she said, pointing at Ryouga. "Nice to meet you" she finished,
extending her hand.
Ami shook it. She turned to Ryouga and smiled at him. "So your name is
Ryouga? I'm sorry I tripped you, Ryouga."
The smile was the last straw for poor Ryouga. His body thumped unto the
floor as the blood spewed forth from his nose. Everybody gathered around
him and looked down. He had an expression of idiotic happiness on his
face.
"Oh my, poor Ryouga!" Akane said
*Man, that was quick. He didn't even get a flash of her breasts and he's
already knocked out.* Ranma thought. He then looked at her. *Can't
really blame him. She is _very_ cute*
"Omigosh! That hit against his head must have caused a contusion! I'll
put a wet towel against his head," Ami said as she took out a
transparent thermos full of water and a little towel from her backpack.
*A wet towel?!? Man, Ryouga is sure in a big one this time... hhmmm...
should I?* Ranma wondered..
*****
That's all I got done in an hour. It's unedited and I haven't checked
spelling, so it might be a little rough. Since I think credit should be
given where it is due, let me mention that I took the Ryouga/Ami general
concept from the shortfic "All Good Things".
Luis Majluf
<http://www.geocities.com/~ollantay/lujen/lujen.html>