Original.. .slightly dark

GT--Well. .  .It was ok. . .I can't really think of anything that stood
out for me in this story, save the three-on-one fight sequence. It was
terribly confusing to me. The ending was nice, though.
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Trevor--Two or Three chapters too long in my opinion. This story could
have been written more efficiently, though the content was sound. Worth
looking over, if you have the time to read the series. The fights were a
bit confusing to follow, though.
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Allan--I liked this, though it was a bit shallow, it was in a different
direction than I'm used to seeing fanfictions take. . .and I hate most
fanfictions. Nabiki's art was interesting. . .but not really necessary
for the story, or even for a comedic element. Good job.

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|Colliding SYmphonies consists of:               |
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|Eimi Nagakawa--of Okinawa, and of Shojo         |
|Trevor J Hamilton--of Fantasy Realm and Fanfics |
|Allan Zilinzik--of dark and depressing human    |
|   nature, and of strong gothics                |
|G.T. Hamilton--of Ranma and Anime Fanfics, and  |
| musics of life and time                        |
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