Continuation--second generation

GT-  I am really wild about next gen type fanfics I like. This one is
the best one that I have come across so far (also the first). I loved
mr.lee's style with very well done obscuring flashbacks with Ranma and
Shampoo. That hint dropping around Ukyou before the scene changed had my
jaw drop. "He did it twice?" Very well written work and HIghly
reccomended.
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Allan---Didn't care for it. Long resolutions are rather sappy in my
opinion, which is pretty much what this series has turned out to be. An
extension ending for what happened in his own chronology. Narrative is
good though. NOthing personal mousse, but I'm not a happy camper, or a
slow one, which is how the series flowed for me.
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Trevor---This is one of the most technically impressive fanfiction I
have had the benefit of reading, with advanced and lucid usage of
flashback, foreshadowing, and many other devices. All of these
contribute to an incredibly steady flow for the story---on the
mechanical merit alone I would reccomend this work. But then I would be
cutting it short of the credit its due for content as well. Definet 4
star.

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