Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][Ranma](beta) Tainted Honor, part 1 - Ill Tidings
From: OtakuLoki@aol.com
Date: 6/19/1997, 6:19 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Just finished this one.  So, these comments are very much off the cuff

Looks good so far.  I want to see more of this.  

I think that the dialog, and the characterisations as shown are very good.  I
am very impressed with the pacing:  The story moves well.  Going from
reaction to reaction without bogging down on any one scene nor seeming to
skimp in any of what's being shown.

I also like the hints you give for Ryouga's guilt.  

Please continue this.  I look forward to reading more of it.

                            -Mike (the OtakuLoki)