At 05:24 18/06/97 -1000, you wrote:
Quick Notes: As I did with 1-3, I'm posting chapters 4-6 together for
anyone who needs a running start into Chapter 6. For people keeping
current, just skip down to the Chapter 6 marker ***. Author notes at the
end.
review of the plot: I don't think you need any major changes; everything is
where they are. One thing though, Xian stay in the Nekohanten but where did
Xiang stay?
Both of them did explain their separations and travels but I think more
depth is needed in explaining why all of a sudden Xiang is in Nerima (plus
why Spice doesn't like Ukyo). And more about Snow please. There's not much
about her, even though she's a minor character.
Author Notes:
That's right. Due to the great abundance of dangling plotlines
I've decided to write at least one more chapter to the ANK series. However
I've also decided this would be a good time to start other projects.
Hopefully Chapter 6 ends the erratic nature of 4 and 5. 6 is the
beginning of the end or not depending on how you look at it. I tried to
bring this as close to an ending as I could in case 7 never saw the light
of day.
There is a glaring omission in Chapter 6 but I was to lazy to fill
in extra scenes to explain the absence. I'll try to fix it later.
Oops, guess you explain why here.
Reviewers, C&Cers, etc. I ask you all to do your thing. please. =)
The problem I've found with this series is that I don't feel myself
growing as an author, in fact I think I'm getting worse. The only comments
I ever get fall along the lines of keep writing, not that I don't love
getting that. I love any mail about my stories, but I don't get any
reviews, public or private. I don't get any in depth C&C. I just keep
writing. I need to get out more, try other generes, improve my writing
skills.
Hey, not all of us have *free* time ^_^ I do feel, however, that this fic
will end prematurely if you try to end it by Chpt 6 or 7.
Anyway, ANK is on sabatical hope you enjoyed reading it. Now all I
have to figure out is where to go from here... darkfic? lemon? crossover?
Oh well, I'm sure something will occur to me. ciao4now...
hmm... time to change the sig too...
How about a Ranma/Twister crossover? A pity that has also ended....
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