At 11:55 PM -0000 6/18/97, Martin wrote:

review of the plot: I don't think you need any major changes; everything is
where they are. One thing though, Xian stay in the Nekohanten but where did
Xiang stay?

	with Xian or just roaming about.  Xiang only arrived recently, he's
been bumming around town mostly.  I couldn't really clear it up until I
revised back chapters.

Both of them did explain their separations and travels but I think more
depth is needed in explaining why all of a sudden Xiang is in Nerima (plus
why Spice doesn't like Ukyo). And more about Snow please. There's not much
about her, even though she's a minor character.

	Xiang was just running away from Snow and decided to find Xian.
I'll try to clear it up when I revise.  Spice doesn't enjoy the idea of
Mousse with anyone. (see: Shades of ANK)  Yet another of those forgotten
plotlines, originally it was Seki who who went to the roof but it turned
out for the best I think.

Hey, not all of us have *free* time ^_^ I do feel, however, that this fic
will end prematurely if you try to end it by Chpt 6 or 7.

	I just need to level the playing surface again.  ANK will probably
return in more episodic stories, like Shades of ANK but longer.  ANK and
ANK2 are more like an extended intro I suppose.
	I always wrote it as more of a journey than a destination.  poor
design on my part which is why I have to end it while I still can.

	Anyway, ANK is on sabatical hope you enjoyed reading it.  Now all I
have to figure out is where to go from here... darkfic?  lemon?  crossover?
Oh well, I'm sure something will occur to me.  ciao4now...
	hmm... time to change the sig too...

How about a Ranma/Twister crossover? A pity that has also ended....

	Never read Twister.  *shrug* The current project in the works is an
as yet untitled Dark Horror Suspense Comedy.  It was a project scrapped a
long time ago but I'm taking some of the scenes and revamping the story.
The original was inspired by the movie Scream, due out on video this month.

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