Subject: Re: [FFML] (C&C) Switch: Herbs and Spices Pt 5 (Day 2)
From: "Nikholas F. Toledo Zu" <niftol@i-manila.com.ph>
Date: 6/17/1997, 12:21 AM
To: shonnie@zeus.anet-chi.com (LaShawn M. Taylor)
CC: fanfic@FANFIC.COM

Gwah!  Gone for a week?!?!  Here's response...

Nabiki...cooking?!?! Oy vey, Ryoga's really done a number on her to spur her
to this extreme, huh?

	Apparently... but how far IS she planning to go?  ^_^  HINT!

Ryoga seemed a tad OOC when he was talking to Ukyo...doesn't mean I don't
like it though! The rocking was a very sweet touch. I'm going to root for
those two to get together.

	Well... actually, I'm trying to get through the next part without
them... kinda lost out on everyone else, see...
	With Mousse and Shampoo not seeing eye to eye, you can tell I'm not
planning to make these the only changes... 

When Mousse made his exit, I got confused on how Tsubasa was knocked
unconscious. I thought it was Tsubasa who fell upon the truck instead of
Mousse.  You may want to make that passage more clearer.

	Tsubasa was in the carton Mousse saw on the roof, but I guess I
didn't clarify it... back to the old keyboard!  ^_^

Looking forward to the next chapter!
	
	Thanks!  So am I... ta-dah!  ^_^

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