Well, I can take negative C&C as well as the next guy. Heck, negative
C&C helped me a lot in revising "Interview" into a much better story.
However, you aren't providing anything in the way of constructive C&C.
You're just dissing it out of hand. Can you expand on your points?
Terrence M Marks wrote:
The Price of Heaven
by Richard Lawson
1) I detest the introduction.
Why?
2) I honestly think that you've taken "Heart of the Home" as
far as you can in "Magic".
What does this mean?
3) A day ago, I would've voted you "least likely to do throw a
crossover in part 21 of a 21-part series". You should've kept
that title.
This is supposed to a sequel to "Out of Sync", and not a continuation of
"Magic". In fact, if you notice, this takes place years before "Magic".
4) I'm just failing to be impressed. Sorry.
Why? Specifics, please, rather than just putdowns.
5) I find myself chanting "Tell the moondog, tell the
march-hare" while reading this...
What does that mean?
Terrence Marks