Subject: Re: [FFML] Preview for future BGC fic
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 6/16/1997, 6:37 PM
To: Fanfiction ML

On Sun, 15 Jun 1997 13:20:25 -0400 Sean Gaffney wrote:

: The crowd is going
: wild.  Moving in onto the stage, we focus on the singer, whom 
: we recognize as a 29-30 year old PRISS.

: Dancers glide across the stage
: in ever more complicated routines, yet the focus of the eye is
: on the woman in the middle.  LINNA is not moving all around the
: stage as the others are.  She doesn't need to, as the focus of
: everyone is on her.  She moves exquisitely, every motion conveying
: something new.  There is a beautiful smile on her face.]

Uh oh...


: [Cut to a church, elsewhere in the city.  We hear the peal of
: organ music, and the Wedding March starts up.  We can see a few
: familiar faces in the crowd - Leon McNichol, Daley Wong.

So, which of the two is wearing the gown?  What, you mean they are
just *guests* at the wedding?


: The groom is unfamiliar, but as
: the veil is lifted, we see the radiant face of NENE, crying with
: happiness.  She and the groom kiss.]

Uh oh!



: [Cut to a view of a white ceiling in an unknown room.  All we can
: see are the holes in the ceiling tiles.  We hear a door open, and
: someone enters.]
: 
: VOICE:  Miss Stingray?  Are you talking today?

: As they leave, our camera angle 
: changes 180 degrees, showing a ceiling shot of the face of SYLIA,
: arms wrapped around her chest, staring at the ceiling with no
: expression.]

Ah, phew!  I was getting seriously disturbed there, waiting for
the elder gods themselves to turn up and rip apart the world like
a wet, used kleenex.  Or something.  I thought that Maybe Sean had
been replaced by his goo- *evil* twin for a moment.  But it seems
that this is going to be one of his typical fics after all.


: --yeah, Sylia is my favorite Saber.  Why do you ask?

Makes sense.  At least in this fic you can *really* identify with
her, eh?


Sebastian
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