Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic] The Nameless Sequel, Episode 8
From: Mike Loader
Date: 6/16/1997, 7:13 PM
To: Sebastian Weinberg
CC: Fanfic Mailing List <fanfic@fanfic.com>

On Mon, 16 Jun 1997, Sebastian Weinberg wrote:
 
: And after much delay.....
: --------------------------------------------------------------------------
: EPISODE 8 - One More Time Around - Finale
: 

A-hem [deeep breath]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!

Oh my!
 
: Kuno: (grimly) Guten abend, Frau Blutdruck, hier sprict Herr Kuno. 
: Kann Ich mit der Doktor sprechen, bitte?

: Kuno: Danke. (pauses) Doctor Van Helsing? Yes, it is Tatewaki
: Kuno.

Van Helsing?  Frau *Blutdruck*?!  Bwaaaahahahahahaaa!

*smirk* I was thinking as I wrote that, "Sebastian's the only one who's
gonna get that one.".. I was wrong, as it turned out. Zen spotted it
immediately.

: Soun: (chewing) Wonderful chicken, Kasumi.
: 
: Kasumi: (smiling) Duck, father. It's duck. 

UH OH!  When she starts serving cat, *run*, Ranma!

Sounds like a Chris Willmore/Kun-chan fic. :) 
 
: Nabiki: (whispering) Remember that plan we had to get him to pay 
: attention? Ready to try it?
: 
: Akane: (nodding) Ready when you are.
: 
: (Nabiki suddenly glomps Akane, kissing her full on the lips. Akane 
: goes through the motions, looking rather embarrassed and 
: unconvincing.)
: 
: Ranma: (staring) Um, Akane? Nabiki? Hey....
: 
: Genma: (gaping) Tendo...?
: 
: Soun: Kasumi, could you pass the salt?
: 
: Kasumi: Here you go, father.

D'oh!  Of course the two slightly-out-of-touch-with-reality
members of the Tendou household would notice nothing.  I mean,
Kasumi wouldn't even raise a brow if she *did* notice.

*nod* But _does_ drop dinner after seeing Akane's hair has been cut in the
anime/manga. 

: (Nabiki lunges forward a bit, and she and Akane fall beneath the 
: table with a crash.)
: 
: Ranma: (pale) Oh man... I know I always call her a tomboy, but I 
: never thought....

Hey, you've still got a chance, Ranma.  Just keep up the cold
showers...

"Ranma, I think Akane's a lesbian."
"Huh? No way, man! She loves me!"
"Err, Ranma.. that doesn't exactly mean I'm wrong, y'know..."
 
: Nabiki: That's down at the Presbyterian Church. This is the 
: wedding of Soun and Kasumi Tendo.

Uh, I hope that's meant to be "weddings".  Nabiki and Akane were
enough incest for one episode.  This could be taking the "Kasumi
replacing her mother" thing a *bit* too far.

Ack! Whoops, need to fix that, yer right. Although I do believe there was
a fic about that...
 
: Ranma: (turning to Saburo) We gotta stop that thing. Akane's in 
: that church, and so are the rest of the Tendos! Oh yeah, and Dad 
: too.

Heh, this is a boy who knows his priorities.

Were it just Genma, he'd be on his way to Kyoto.
 
: Saburo: It's 30 miles to Nerima. We've got a full tank of gas, a 
: carton of okonomiyaki, there's an alien spaceship hanging over the 
: city, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses.
: 
: (They think this over for all of a nanosecond.)
: 
: Ranma and Saburo: (together) Hit it.

Waaaahhh, I *love* it!  Good setup with the sunglasses, too.

Couldn't quite fit in "We're on a mission from God".

: Nabiki: (reading tag) To Kasumi, new Native Planetary Governor, 
: from the Empire.

I knew it!  Kasumi rulez!

Scary thought, ne?

: Zen Monk: (peering at them) STOP!
: 
: Ranma: Huh?
: 
: Zen: (waving his arms impressively) If you marry that beast at 
: your side, you shall die an early, horrible death! Destruction! Woe! 

:D :D :D :D

Shoulda kept the "Monk" part.  The wooden-mallet-over-the-head
approach kinda spoils the humour here.  Still a *great* gag.

I think Akane deserves to get to slam 'ol Zen into LEO at least once. :)

: Akane: (straightening her dress, flattened disks of lead fall off) I 
: told Oneechan the Kevlar dress was a good idea.

And yet another well-prepared gag.

All the way back in Ep 7, yup. :)

Of course, in NS "well-prepared" just means "hey, I said ----- back in
---, that would let me say ------ here! Yeah!"

: Ranma: (angrily) Huh? Perfect Japanese? You're not Shampoo!
: 
: Nabiki: (in a flash of inspiration) That's right! Oh, Ranma, it was 
: horrible! This demon killed Shampoo and took her place! The 
: humanity of it all!

:D :D :D :D

Smart girl.  Ooohh, gotta lover her, gotta love her.

Unless, of course, you're Akane. ;)

: (Zoom in on Soun and Kodachi, still locked in a kiss. Fade to black.)
: 
: END OF EPISODE 8
: 
: Epilogue to come! Wait for it.....

There's still the case of the disappearing Institut Rats to
solve - and it began with a wish...

*chuckle* While the Rats don't appear in the sequel, they _do_ do straight
from NS to another fic. Which isn't out yet. ;)

Sebastian
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