I'm not going to quote any of this story here.  But I must say, I liked this
alot.  Not only for a good monologue type story.  Which is rare here...  but
more because you played so WELL with this reader's expectations.  
     I got half into the story, and I knew just who was talking to who's
grave.  And I was wrong!!!  I loved it!  
     The only clue that should have given it away before the end was the line
about how good Daley looked with his piece in his hand.  I raised an eyebrow
at that, but it didn't make me really reevaluate anything...  
     I would like to see more of your work.  this was very nice.  


                          -Mike (the OtakuLoki)