Andrew Dynon wrote:
I would like to apologise for being a bit out of line when I posted my last
message. As I tried to explain at the beginning, I had had a day where
absolutely nothing had gone right, and I was feeling very frustrated and
depressed when I wrote that post (which was also why I made errors like
saying "r.a.a.c" instead of "r.a.a.m" - I was too tired and frustrated to
really think about what I was doing). I deeply apologise if I offended
anybody, and humbly ask your forgiveness - the post was intended to let off
steam, not insult anybody. It's morning now (here) and I feel better.
Dear Andrew,
Please, Rant. Rave. Throw a fit. Step in it.
You have created more(visible) feed back with that Rant than(I assume, no offense
meant) your Fic. Being angry is good. Being depressed is good. Being in love is good.
Ifatuation is good.
Ego is bad.
My first step in dealing with problems is simple. Do not place ones' ego between
yourself and your problem. This will just make the problem bigger.
Leymans terms:
If you don't mind, it won't matter.
I have one recommendation for you. In fact, this works for everyone, so feel free to
share: Write a number of short fics. Make them powerful stories. Flex your writing
muscles. Make people want to read your work by the nature of the work itself.
By this method, you will get more people interested in your favorite series.
Personally, I have never seen Iczer 1 nor Mekton Z.
My Anime experience is limited to
Ranma 1/2
Mermaid's Forest
Urusei Yastura
Bubblegum Crisis/Crash
Ahh! Megumisama!
El Hazard
Tenchimuyo
Neon Genisis Evangelion
D.N.A.^2
Here's Greenwood
Explorer Woman Ray (indy jones+anime babe)
Jo-Jo's Bizzarre Adventure
Marmelade Boy
Wicked city
Akira
Crying Freeman
All Purpose cultural cat-girl Nuku Nuku
Phantom Quest Corps
Gunsmith Cats
A Wind Called Amnesia
Kekko Kamen (it was a dare)
Moldiver
Battleship Yamamato(sp?)
...
Well, limited may be a bit extreme.
Still, I have not seen Icer 1. Being that is the case, I cannot identify with the
characters you envision in your fic.
So, outside of egregious spelling errors, typos, and grammatical nonsense, I really
cannot coment on your series.
Thank you for your time