SOunds like Akane has been very busy and very angry. Are 
you sure this isn't a sequel to the Bitter End? I hope in 
the fanfic tthe assumptions will be filled out a lot more 
thoroughly. For example has the engagement with Akane been 
permanently ended ( they aren't dating or seeing each 
other) or just that they are seing each other but aren't 
officially engaged anymore? I liked what you did and would 
like to see more. 
Rick
rik@cfanet.com