I liked this fic (or part of a fic), there were several 
parts of it that were excellent. The phone call and the 
reactions were priceless. I really cracked up at this 
point.
  I also like the line about "well at least I don't write 
fanfics". SHEESH talk about biting the hand that feeds you.
  On the bad side I thought there was too much talk about 
the equations and the numbers, this just slowed down the 
story with out advancing the plot. 
 Who is the Phoenix? he is mentioned once as having given 
advice and nowhere else.
 There was one line where the hero is supposed to be 
reading some Kanji and is "thinking" Japanese I don't know 
any Japanese!
 I really liked the idea of and English speaking Ukyou 
visiting an American high school.
 I wonder will Wei show Ukyou any of his Ranma mangas or 
anime?

Rick 

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